Who is Aramaki? Motoko? Batou? Sawamura? An article must not assume that the reader is intimately familiar with its topic.The section is incomplete: What is the game? an RPG? a shooter? an action adventure? How does the player progress in the game? By completing levels? objectives? Are there any bosses? Does the Fuchikoma have health? What is the difference between using Machine-guns vs Bombs? Overall, this section leaves more questions than answers.
The phrase "The game had received mainly positive reviews for its graphics, animation, and music, including its unusual wall-climbing mechanics with some negative targeting its tedious gameplay and low difficulty" needs some copyediting to make sense.ĭone Just added today by Niemti.The lead does not summarize adequately the body of the article since it does not contain information about the gameplay and development.ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 23:24, 12 November 2013 (UTC) "is a cyberpunk video game developed by Exact for the PlayStation" - Use video game genres instead of visual/narrative genres.ĭone by someone else.However, I see a number of serious issues that need to be addressed before the article passes a GA review. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Ghost in the Shell (video game)/GA1.
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